Great concept. Masterfully executed.
I've always loved musical games, or games with dynamic music. I think it's something with great potential, and you showed that with this short game.
The visuals are simple but clean, even professional looking. The gameplay is great and I honestly think it's got potential.
Perfect Score, I hope to see more from you!

Okay so I'm all out for Deep Artsy games. And this is one of those.
I think the message is interesting and the concept of this game is awesome.
However I believe in execution it feels disjointed.
My main issue with this game is how abstracted and unrelated the actual gameplay seems to be in relation with the message. The gameplay feels completely out of place in the story, and I think you could have thought out a gameplay that was more related with the narrative or the message you wanted to convey other than platforming and lighting switches with smoke.
Don't get me wrong the gameplay is greatly coded, the music is masterfully done (was it dynamic?) and the message of the story is really interesting. However when you piece them together it doesn't mix up well.
4/5 Very good game, keep improving!

great

The game is fun and has some interesting mechanics. The music is not that good though.

Great

Really good, reminds me of Metal Gear Solid 2